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Please just write me a story. Longer the better. The one that makes me smile the most wins! Any topic (but you can never go wrong with a horse story).
Well maybe a LITTLE bit more than 24 hours. Will go until after auction tomorrow, as that is an easy time to keep track of.
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Oooh I'm rethinking my plan to sell my ice5 guy now :x
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"Longer the better."
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I got this. (assuming I get a lunch break tomorrow, at least.) -
:) Can't wait! I need a good cheer. Not sure why, but I'm grumpy this morning...
Just a little over 6 hours letBreeder of any and all crazy colored drafts and RH horses. -
Ha, I did *not* get to take my lunch break. So this may be too late. But it's written, and I had fun writing it. So I'm posting it anyway. In multiple pieces.
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The Street Rat Part 1 of 4
Quinalaos was deep in discussion with Tamas Greencloak and Irita the Swallow when he first felt the slight nudging on his magic wards. He ignored it. He mostly only set them up to serve as a good example. Sitting on the widest, smoothest part of the Saraki river, Askis simply had too much ferry traffic and trade across the border to get genuinely alarmed when someone was using magic nearby. Closer to the more central cities in Rakia, absolutely – there would be no reason for a Valley-trained mage to be wasting magic like that without Quinalaos needing to get involved, and a foreign mage using magic in those streets would be worth questioning. Here, in the sprawling hub of Askis? There were too many people. No just Saraki, but Yan from beyond the northern mountains riding down mountain trails, and Islanders and Omeyyans traveling across the sea and past the gapping delta of the Chanjang River. The irritating nudge was more likely to be some marginally Talented street performer hoping that Rakene would be more generous than his own people. He shrugged off the twitching of his wards, which felt to him like shrugging someone’s hand off his shoulder and continued passing orders to Tamas and Irita without breaking.
“-has consolidated power too quickly. None of us like that he continues to have the Emperor’s ear after that business in Atatraxis. Sarbanis is nothing more than a common-born assassin. We need to know why Atridis still values him now that he’s gotten his throne. Sarbanis having free rein of the eastern bank of this river will keep us from traveling freely not to mention -”
His wards nudged him again. Harder this time, like someone had firmly placed their arm on his shoulder and was leaning on him. He cracked his neck in annoyance. Couldn’t the performer find a better, richer street to perform on? This area was blocks away from the bazaar. Surely there were better marks over there.
“Not to mention,” he continued, “our reduced presence on the eastern bank makes it easier for him to get his people over here. Our priority needs to be driving some sort of wedge between Sarbanis and the Emperor. Anything to get him out of the capital.”
Tamas hestitated. “We can’t face him head on though. Not unless you have another Bear up your sleeve.”
Irita rolled her eyes. “It’s been six years. Let it go already. Anyway, the Bear may have stolen your girl, but he wasn’t invincible. He only cared about attack and never concerned himself with learning shields or warding, or anything about misdirection. He was in Sarak for years before the cauldron boiled over. Sarbanis just learned his style before the Emperor finally set his wolfhound on the Bear.”
“You go after him, then”
“Spy. Not battlemage. You go after him. Or did you get that cloak by rolling around in the grass?”
“Quit it. Irita, stop baiting him.” Quinalaos shrugged off another nudge. “The Magus is not willing to throw the best of us at Sarbanis while he has the high ground. He wants to figure out how to disgrace him. No man’s perfect. Find his vices, play to them, make them enough of an embarrassment that the Emperor has to send him away. Once he’s out of the Sarak court, we can get back in. The Magus is not willing to risk any more-” -
Part 2 of 4
Quinalaos stumbled forward. That was no nudge this time. That was someone shoving. And hard. Which meant that was no street performer trying to glamour the crowd. That was a full on magic user, deliberately doing…well, what, he wasn’t quite certain. He had set up his wards just to let him know if anyone got too close to them, but he hadn’t actually expected to need them. Not making that mistake again in a hurry. Wasn’t he just warning his Askis heads about the possibility of Sarbanis sneaking agents across the river?
Charging for the door, Quinalaos shouted over his shoulder. “Out the back! Don’t do anything, just block the street. I want to know who’s casting magic like!”
The sun dazzled him as he shoved his way through the alehouse’s doorway. The heavy cloth that closed the and helped keep out the sand had given the tavern a gloomy darkness. Good for unnoticed conversations in dark corners. Bad for running out into sunlight. So he stood there in the middle of the street, blinking, trying to comprehend what he saw.
There was no street performer. There was no Saraki master mage. There wasn’t even a Yan shaman or a ship’s windcaster drinking off his month’s pay. There were…kids? Brawling in the street. It looked like three teenagers trying – and failing – to land blows on another boy. They were grouped around him a loose circle. Two additional fighters were already down, one clutching an arm and shouting obscenities. Quinalaos couldn’t tell if he was shouting encouragement to his companions or just shouting at their opponent. As Quinalaos watched, the boy in the center dodged a clumsy charge by the largest of his opponents and then pushed.
Pushed at empty air. Quinalaos felt his wards rumble in his ear.
The would-be tackler continued further, tripping over his feet. Despite his apparent attempts to slow himself, he slammed headfirst into the mud walled building on the other side of the street, and slumped down to the ground. As he turned away, the boy’s eyes locked with Quinalaos’s. He threw a furtive glance over his shoulder. Irita and Tamas were on the far end of the brawl, Quinalaos saw. Irita was blending into small clump of people, but Tamas’s stood in the middle of the street with his sword drawn. Even though most people wouldn’t recognize the green cloak he wore as one of the more obscure titles a Mage of the Valley could earn, his short straight sword identified him as a mage as well as the traditional black cloaks would have done. The kid turned to look at Quinalaos again, and this time, Quinalaos saw that a grim determination had come to the boy’s face. He knew he’d been found. Before he could do anything with that realization, however, another of his attackers was on him. After a scuffle with both of them wildly throwing blows, they pulled apart again. The kid in the center now had an eye that was rapidly swelling, but the other boy’s nose was gushing blood. The boy looked back at Tamas again. Turning slightly so he could both the two boys that were still standing, the black-haired boy reached out and pushed.
Hard.
Quinalaos, hit by both the blast of magic and the pressure on his wards warning of magic – bit wasted now – stumbled backwards before he caught himself. He was dimly aware of the other crowd members and the fighting boys being thrown back a good dozen feet. But he kept his eyes on the now fleeing back of the black haired boy and took off after him. Qinalaos was taller and stronger, but the kid knew where he was going and had the advantage of about twenty fewer years. Quinalas charged after him, shouting at the crowded streets to let him pass. He almost – almost – lost him when the kid ducked down an alley so narrow that Quinalaos hadn’t even seen it before. A wall as tall as a man blocked the far end, and Qinalaos could hear the bustle of the bazaar from the other side. If the kid made it into the mess, good look catching him. He strongly suspected the kid knew how to jump up the wall. If he had ever been able to do it, Quinalaos knew he certrainly wouldn’t be able to do that now. He put on a last burst of speed, and just managed to grab the kid’s shirt trail as he scaled the wall.
Quinalaos pulled the fleeing boy off the wall. In doing so, he accidentally flung him into a pile of manure that had accumulated in the alley. He wasn’t terribly sorry. He didn’t have to do that, but the kid didn’t have to run, either. Quinalaos stepped on the boy’s back, pushing him down until the kid stopped struggling. Once the kid sighed and stopped fighting, he helped him up.
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Part 3 of 4
“Saw your fight. That was vicious. You break that other one’s arm, too?”
“I don’t start fights,” he kid said, wiping his face with a uselessly dirty sleeve. “But I do finish them.”
Quinalaos frowned. Although the boy was tall, he was younger than he first seemed. Most Talented kids were identified by the time they were six as their uncontrolled magic spilled out of them, and they were all picked up to go to the Valley by the time they were eight. This kid had to be eleven or twelve. Mixed blood too. His face and hair were Rakian, alright, but his eyes screamed Saraki. “Must have been a pretty good fight, get you to lose your temper like that. What was it, you trespass on their territory?”
The kid snorted. “Pickings are much better at the bazaar. They only wanted that street because I was on it.”
“Mmmhmm. And what, the little slips of magic before that were what?”
The boy gave a sheepish grin. “Just a little charming. Adorable street rats that are harmless can’t possibly be picking pockets can they?”
“Pretty bold admitting that to the likes of me, kid.”
“I mean…it’s not like you’re going to leave me here if I say it, right?”
“Unlikely.”
They stood in the alley in silence for a moment. Quinalaos broke it. “You got a name? You have parents?”
“My sister calls me Nessy. It’s just us.”
“I think we probably need to go talk to her then.”
Nessy started to move off, but Quinalaos grabbed his shoulder. “Nice try. Just at a walk, nice and slow-like. No more running. Make it easier for both of us, will you.”
Nessy looked up, his eyes locking with Quinalaos again. “No more running. Promise.”
Nessy navigated through the bustling streets. Quinalaos tried to be surprised when the boy led him to a whorehouse. Once of the classy places, to be sure, with actual rooms for people who wanted a whole night, but still. He secured his grip on the boy’s shoulder after they went through the door. There was a large man sitting on a cushion near a set of stairs that led to the upper rooms. He lit up when Quinalaos walked in. Mages paid extra for discretion. Then he noticed his grip on Nessy’s shoulder. His eyes narrowed.
“What did he do this time?”
“This time? Getting a reputation, are we?” Quinalaos muttered to Nessy. In a louder voice, he said, “we need to talk to his sister.”
“Are you sure my lord? She’s getting ready for her singing tonight. I have other ladies if you’re-”
“Just his sister please.”
The brotherkeeper sighed. “Hard sell, eh? Cori! Go get Sara. Tell her brother’s in trouble again.”
Sara turned out not to be what he expected.
She swept down the stairs like a queen. She wore a silk gown, but her hair straight black hair hung loose. Her almond-shaped eyes were lined with kohl, but the rest of her face had the first layers of the white make-up worn by Saraki court ladies. Sara was The Sarakina, the most celebrated singer, dancer, and entertainer in Askis, possibly in all of Rakia. She had made a stir when she had auctioned herself off several years earlier. Men still paid high prices to say they slept with her. Quinalaos had seen her seen in the bazaar once, trying to stir up attention for her services. Quinalaos wondered why she felt she needed to sing – her beauty would have stirred up enough interest for certain – but her voice had been so lovely he hardly cared.
She swept down the stairs, concern written upon her face. Her Rakian was tinged with her native accent. “Nessy, we’ve talked about this, what this time?”
Her face fell when she saw Quinalaos and took in the crestfallen face of Nessy. Just as quickly as Nessy had known his secret was out when he saw Quinalaos and Tamas in the street, the Sarakina knew what a mage bringing her brother home meant. It would be the last time he was brought home.
“Oh, Nessy,” she said softly. “Nessy.” She knelt down and hugged him close to her.
Nessy burst into tears. “I’m sorry, I’m so sorry. I didn’t mean-”
“Shh. Nessy, don’t cry. Nessy, shh. We knew this day would come. We knew it wasn’t forever. Look at me, Nessy” The Sarakina lifted her brother’s chin. “You were meant for so much more than the gutter.”
As Nessy struggled to stop his tears, the Sarakina looked up at Quinalaos. “He can take his things with him, right? They are just a kid’s things, but…” She trailed off.
“Yes. He won’t need anything anymore. We’ll provide it for him. But they’re allowed to bring a bag with them, if it helps.”
“Go get your things, Nessy. Come right back.” Nessy darted up the stairs. -
Part 4 of 4
Quinalaos made to follow him. “He’ll come back,” the Sarakina said. “You have my word on that. He is a good boy. He just gets…bored.”
Quinalaos glanced up the stairs, then decided to trust her. He had learned to rely on his instincts since his own graduation from the Valley. He needed to talk with her.
“How long have you known?”
“About the magic? I don’t remember not knowing. He was drawing things to him and making things fly before he could walk. The odds were in his favor, anyway. His father was…very powerful. And his mother had her own magic.”
“We have laws against things like that here.”
The Sarakina snorted in laughter. “Please! What are you going to do to me? Everything I have had, has already been taken from me. All this,” she said, making a gesture with her hands that took in the brothel room with its stage, the stairs to the private rooms, and her own, carefully calculated presentation, “all this was for his sake. If it was just me, I would have gladly moved in with some lonely noble. But lords don’t like their mistresses showing up with their little brothers at heel.” She looked him in the eye. “There is nothing you can do to me, that will hurt more than losing him.”
Quinalaos understood, in a way. His own mother hadn’t fought to keep him from the Valley, but he had been the fourth of sixth children with another on the way. Professor Tateh, who had been his parent’s only child when he left for the University, had once told him that his mother had hidden him in the thatch of the roof when the school recruiters had come looking for him. ‘Well, don’t do it again.”
“I only have the one brother. It’s just us.”
“Brother?”
“Half-brother.” She said it somewhat defensively, as if daring him to say something. Quinalaos gathered that this was a conversation path she’d been down many times before. He didn’t really care. He just had to make sure of something.
“I’m only asking this because of the…unpleasantness with Sarak lately. They accuse us of stealing kids, we accuse them of it….He is Rakene, right?”
The Sarakina looked defiantly at him. “We are both Rakene now,” she said. “There is nothing left for us in Sarak. No one will come looking for him, if that’s your fear.”
“So you two shared the same…”
“Father. He was a minor noble of the old court of the Sarak. My mother was a courtesan. His mother was some Rakian. Not enough magic for your fancy school, just enough to be lucky at cards, good with glamour, things like that.”
Quinalaos nodded, glad for some luck. While Rakian parentage traced through father’s side regardless of circumstance, in the case of split families, Saraki children belonged to the mother and her family. Even if Nessy had been born in Sarak, they could hardly object to him attending the University in his mother’s homeland.
“Does he half to leaf now? You’re not one of the mage hunters.”
“He’s too old. He’ll already be behind. If we wait until next summer, he’ll be even further behind. And if you don’t mind me saying, I don’t trust you that far. You did successfully hide him for what? Four years past when he should have been sent to us? I was going to be leaving for the Valley tomorrow anyway. I’ll take him myself. Make sure he gets there okay.”
As he finished the last part, Quinalaos wondered why he had said that. He really didn’t care if the Sarakina felt reassured, and he certainly wasn’t feeling sorry for the boy that had led him on that case. But any further conversation was ended by Nessy’s return. He had a small bundle tucked under his arm and had changed into a non-manure covered shirt.
Quinalaos turned for the door. Behind him, he heard Nessy hug his sister one last time before leaving. She had knelt down again and Nessy looked to be on the verge of tears again, and he stared at the ground, trying to hide it. She held his face, making him look up at her.
“Listen to me, Nessy. I love you. I have always loved you. I will always love you. Be glad for the time we had. But now you have something new! Make me proud. Watch. Listen. Learn everything you can. And always be honest.” With that, she hugged him one last time, and sent him after Quinalaos.
The mage and the boy trudged down the street. His horse was still at the tavern where he had left Irita and Tamas. He wondered if he should find a pony or a donkey for the boy to ride. Was it too far to the Valley for them to ride double? He looked down at the kid. He had a serious face on, trying to be brave for his sister.
“Nessy, huh? That doesn’t sound Saraki. Nickname?”
“Yeah. Sara said my name was unlucky in Sarak.”
“What’s it short for?”
“Soliminis. But she says I shouldn’t say it that way here, because the letters are different. It’s really Solemines.”
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